Chapter 4, Page 11

posted 14th Jul 2019

Chapter 4, Page 11
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view Owlsy's profile

14th Jul 2019, 12:20 PM


In which Bijou becomes suddenly fond of the old, stuck-up seamstress

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14th Jul 2019, 12:36 PM


disgraceful! distasteful! I declare!

view Owlsy's profile

17th Jul 2019, 12:54 PM


Most improper! Undignified!

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14th Jul 2019, 12:44 PM


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17th Jul 2019, 1:14 PM


At least it wasn't a green rupee.

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14th Jul 2019, 1:37 PM


Perhaps under the bed?

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17th Jul 2019, 1:10 PM


Ooh, clever. As long as she doesn't bump into the CHAMBER POT. That would be a bad time.

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14th Jul 2019, 2:06 PM


I second Roux's notion that this "find the key" scenario gives off a quite video game-y vibe! :-D

Also, let's hope that Bijou doesn't "suddenly find the old stuck seamstress", learning that she in fact never left the room and instead perished in the key's hiding place...

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17th Jul 2019, 1:08 PM


The whole first part of this chapter was very much like writing an 'escape the room' game, haha.

I read a gothic novel that employed an extremely similar scenario! Dark stuff!

view MK_Wizard's profile

14th Jul 2019, 2:26 PM


However, is this a good idea?

view Owlsy's profile

17th Jul 2019, 1:00 PM


Bijou's ideas usually aren't, haha

view ordinarycat's profile

18th Jul 2019, 12:09 AM


Time to furiously click the key onto every pixel of the screen, like in those old point-and-click games! :D

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18th Jul 2019, 11:08 AM


Oh boy were those the days!!

It'll go something like this, probably:
use key on lock: nothing happens.
Combine key with candlewax: obtained waxy key.
Use waxy key on lock: nothing happens.